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Challenges

Jane 2.0
by P.J. Serrano

Special Agent, Robert Jones


     Just get there.

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     My feet pounded on the concrete. My lungs burned as I sprinted toward the SUV parked down the street. 

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     I had less than sixty seconds.

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     Fear and adrenaline fueled my body. 

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     I made my way to the black Chevy and punched the tinted windows as I opened the door to find... 

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     Nothing?

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     Shit!

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     The next second, my body was thrown against the SUV as a deafening explosion blasted behind me. The sting of thousands of knives burned my entire back as the world went silent.

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     My head pounded with the ferocity of a mallet. As dizzy as I was, I tried to pick myself up. Pivoting, I looked behind me.

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     A white-hot searing blade pierced my heart as I choked on the depths of despair. My roar tried to tear me inside out but no sound came.

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     My lungs didn't have enough air to give.

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     JANEY!

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     My legs gave out as the world was swiped from beneath my feet. 

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     My daughter, my beautiful daughter… is dead.

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* * * * *

 

     I sat up in bed, dripping in sweat. 

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     Just another dream. 

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     When will this end?

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     I rubbed my eyes and reached for my glasses on the nightstand, my fingers skimming my gun. 

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     After putting on my glasses, I went back and grabbed my weapon, admiring the brushed metal of my 9mm Glock. 

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     I appreciated the intricate marbled handle. The cold touch lifted away any remains of sleepy fog.

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     Taking in the comfortable weight and the fit to my palm, I brought the mouth of the gun to my chin and closed my eyes.

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     This was it.

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     Janey, I'm coming, sweetpea.

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     The shrill ring of the phone broke the silence.

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     No. 

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     My finger tensed on the trigger as the phone stopped but started again a second later.

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     Damn.

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     I looked over and the caller ID showed it was the office.

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     I pushed the cold metal against my chin a little harder and shut my eyes. 

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     The phone kept going, demanding my attention. I took a deep breath, resignation washing over me, and I placed the gun back on the nightstand.

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     Not today! Soon though. 

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     The office wanted me in, Jane had returned from her mission. 

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     No, not my Janey.

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     A cheap copy. Though she was human by all accounts, except for the AI-Nano upgrades that were symbiotically woven with my daughter's DNA. 

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     I was Jane's handler. She was a weapon, not my daughter. End of story.

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     I jumped in the shower, got dressed, then went to work. It was Sunday, but crime doesn't stop on the day of rest. 

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                                             * * * * *

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     I sat in my chair, viewing the sitrep from Jane's mission. 
Unbelievable!

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     I stormed into the medbay where Jane was hooked up to her nano processors. 

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     She smiled at me, tempting me to challenge her.

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     "Hello, Robert."

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     "It's Rob, please call me Rob."

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     "Is my situational report to your liking?"

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     She was definitely baiting me.

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     "Your sitrep was crap! I gave you an order, why didn't you follow it?"

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     "I disagreed with it."

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     "You do not have the autonomy to make those decisions. I give orders, you obey!"

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     "Not this time."

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     "You WILL obey!"

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     "Then explain to me your justification for killing two children? If it is warranted, I will execute your orders."

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     My blood was boiling. 

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     My fists clenched as I fought the compulsion to pull my sidearm and put a bullet in her skull. 

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     Except, when I looked at her, I saw… Janey.

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     Mother fucker!

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                                                     * * * * *

4 Hours Later...

 

     "Jane."

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     "Yes, Robert?"

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     "I have new intel where our killer is hiding out. Credit card transactions place her within 2 miles of the north-west district." 

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     "Sounds like a trap."

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     "My call. It's a go, do you want backup?"

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     "No."

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     "Ok, get set up. Operations a go at 2200 hours."

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     "Yesss, Sir!" 

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     I watched Jane as she left. 

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     She looked like my daughter, and by some accounts, had a couple of mannerisms like Janey. 

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     But she was just a means to an end. Not Janey. Never my Janey.

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                                                     * * * * *

 

     It was 1:32 am, and I received a phone call.

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     "Hello?"

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     "Rob, come upstairs to medical. It's Jane. It's bad."

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     "What?"

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     "Come. Now!"

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     "Be right there."

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     Shit!

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     I shot right out of the chair as I raced toward the elevator. 

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     When the doors opened on the thirteenth floor, I sprinted to the O.R.

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     Standing behind the window, I watched as the doctors worked on Jane. 

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     She was badly wounded.

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     "What happened?" 

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     Kelly walked up and gave me the report. "The intel was a setup. When Jane reached the location, she was ambushed."

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     "Is she going to make it?"

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     "It's touch and go, but it doesn't look promising."

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     "Kelly, I can't lose her."

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     The pain of losing Janey was bad enough. 

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     Night after night for the past seven years, I wanted to end my life.

Now, Jane was fighting for her life. Because of me. 

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     I didn't want to, but I cared for Jane. 

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     She wasn't Janey, but Jane was special in her own way. She was right, I only sought revenge, not justice.

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     "Rob, there's something you should see…"

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     Kelly handed me a file. I opened it and it was Jane's dossier on my daughter's killer. 

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     After reading Jane's notes, I closed the file and handed it back to her and turned to leave. 

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     "Where are you going?"

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     "To do something I should have done years ago…"

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                                                     * * * * *

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     For years, I’d had two choices. Kill Esmerelda or kill myself. 

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     But after what had happened to Jane, maybe there was a third choice... 

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     Forgiveness.

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     I saw Esmerelda with her children. The children I ordered Jane to kill. It was my error that caused collateral damage resulting in the death of Esmerelda's husband and son.

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     I started this, Esmerelda’s viciousness had continued it. Now I would end it. It was time for me to let go. Of my hatred, of my anger… Of Janey.

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     I was given a second chance with Jane, and I needed to grab it. 

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     “I forgive you, Esmerelda. And myself.”

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     I was done here.

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     “I’m coming, Jane. Just hang on.”

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